Nothing againts you or your art But I would try some different poses and shapes cuz pictures you uploaded so far looks like ctrl-c Ctrl-v kind of drawing...
but othervise its cute

Sometimes I really use ctrl-c vtrl-v for spare some time ^_____^; ...but only of things drawed by me :)

Yeah Theres nothing bad on that, just first three pictures (angel, adventure time and Vilma and daphne) have all same shapes- you do have really cute style but using one pose over and over kinda ruins it- It just need bit of diversity othervise I like it and Im holding thumbs

Yep, I understand Thank you :)

do you would draw Chōchō Akimichi ?

They all girls have the same bodies, You will have to improve it in the future

Holding thumbs DaZa, feel free to PM me if you would need any kind of help

@Jajozanik Thank you for your suggestion :)
The idea of these works was to create a character that almost like a cosplay imper***ate various famous characters in a chubby version, from which the same shapes ...but you're right! When they are more than one together was better to diversify a bit ^___^

Yeah I havce one more advice, the most important one... DIBKIS
Do It Big Keep It Strange

I like the cute style but what I can say is so far the girls in the pictures you uploaded have nearly the same expression. If you want to eventually take commissions on whentai you have to be able to draw a range of expressions as requested. People here especially like expressions specific to hentai, like the ahegao face.